Term 2



Mrs Parker wrote: a very imaginative concept, Blair, an ice cream stealing alien coming out of a portal.
Editing points: all the speakers need to be on their own line. The punctuation must follow this format - speech marks, capital letter, full stop or comma close speech marks. said xxxx full stop or comma.

WALT: use speech marks correctly

We tried to find the creature that came out of the portal. It turns out that it loves ice cream. It had robbed an ice cream shop earlier. When we cornered it we stood their in shock looking at the alien. I’m going to name you unknown”. I said it said I’m trying to find my portal’’ in a cranky voice. ‘’It can talk” I said.

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Silver Pete

Silver Pete was a cowboy kind of guy who was really good with a gun. but one day